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andy_aoye
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Posts: 35
From: Portland Maine USA
Registered: 05-01-2007
 		Hi
Just want to let everyone know a new design for Apple of your Eye is up. taken some of the advice given me last post and reworked some of the bad area's of the site.
Any feed back would be great.

PS. the site is still a work in progress.

PPS. the story I have up (one hungry day) is just a space filler.. its unedited and full of grammer no no's

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Apple of Your Eye.
Christian Entertainment

Matherhorn Interactive.
andy_aoye
Member

Posts: 35
From: Portland Maine USA
Registered: 05-01-2007
 		Sorry.. Heres the address

http://www.geocities.com/andy_aoye/about.html

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Apple of Your Eye.
Christian Entertainment

Matherhorn Interactive.
HanClinto

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Posts: 1828
From: Indiana
Registered: 10-11-2004
 		It looks much better! I like the color scheme -- it's very visually pleasing.

The use of the word "mature" is a bit odd, as it carries a connotation of adult themes (even though you specifically say elsewhere that such things have no place on your site). I'm not sure what word would be better -- it's just a bit odd.

Out of curiosity, have you thought about using something like Google Pages that doesn't require the use of banner ads on the right side?

Keep up the great work, and thanks for keeping us posted!

--clint

Edit: Fixed link

[This message has been edited by HanClinto (edited July 10, 2007).]
Calin

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Posts: 358
From: Moldova
Registered: 12-04-2006
 		Google Pages ^_^

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andy_aoye
Member

Posts: 35
From: Portland Maine USA
Registered: 05-01-2007
 		Yeah the "Mature" word is a bit odd.. Mayby I should use a thesaurus for word. And I didn't know about google pages. I did try to investigate the google website for web hosting but didnt find anything.. Ill check it out thanks.

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Christian Entertainment

Matherhorn Interactive.
MastaLlama

Member

Posts: 671
From: Houston, TX USA
Registered: 08-10-2005
 		Instead of "mature" have


Animation
        General (13+)
        Children's(12 and under)
Film
        General (13+)
        Children's (12 and under)

or something like that.
HanClinto

Administrator

Posts: 1828
From: Indiana
Registered: 10-11-2004
 		Nice suggestion Jeremy -- I like that.
andy_aoye
Member

Posts: 35
From: Portland Maine USA
Registered: 05-01-2007
 		Very nice sudjestions.. I think I might just use that thank you.

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buddboy

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Posts: 2220
From: New Albany, Indiana, U.S.
Registered: 10-08-2004
 		or:


Animation
     Animations
     Children's Animations
Film
     Films
     Children's Films

mastallama's is a good suggestion as well, I think it's just a matter of personal preference, what you want your site to say.

edit: BTW your site says fowl, it's foul. just letting you know.
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