Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
Hello all, Karl said I should let you guys know that I put my book up free to read. I don't know if anyone here will even remmember me by now. ~_~ If you go to www.Vailion.com you will find my book. I'm working on collecting reviews from my readers, and hopfuly make a list of people who want to buy the book. Well, that's what is going on with me. Oh, the book is a fantacy - comidy - dark romance - thing. |
bennythebear Member Posts: 1225 From: kentucky,usa Registered: 12-13-2003 |
i remember you, though i think it's been a while since you've posted, and from what i remember it was a long time before that *edit: i hope things go well with your book. i usually only read technical books(programming,networking,etc...and never finish them ). anywho...better go before i ramble on for about 3 pages... www.gfa.org - Gospel for Asia www.persecution.com - Voice of the Martyrs [This message has been edited by bennythebear (edited January 21, 2005).] |
Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
bennythebear, That's ok, I'm pritty much the same. Karl, |
D-SIPL Moderator Posts: 1345 From: Maesteg, Wales Registered: 07-21-2001 |
Hey Angel, It's been a while. Great news about the book. It's late here, but i'll get reading tommorow. I'll put it on my PDA or something. Great to hear from you again! --D-SIPL ------------------
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Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
D-SIPL, It's nice to be back. How goes the gaming industry? I hear it's not so great. Hope you enjoy your read; send me an e-mail of what you think ok. |
goop2 Member Posts: 1059 From: Registered: 06-30-2004 |
Hmmmm... I think I saw you acouple times... dont realy remember you though, sorry ------------------ I dont like siggys. They are to hard to think up :( |
Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
goop2, I was here back in 2001 I think. Worked on three diffrent games, all the teams broke up, very sad you know. This place is why I got into writing. So, that's why I come back every now and then, just to check up on the place. |
bennythebear Member Posts: 1225 From: kentucky,usa Registered: 12-13-2003 |
do you/did you program? ------------------ www.gfa.org - Gospel for Asia www.persecution.com - Voice of the Martyrs |
Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
No, I wrote story lines; did some 3d/2d work. I wouldn't be any use to anyone here now. I spend all my time writing and editing now. |
Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
Well, some people from here were interested, so I figured I should come back with an update. I've placed 9 chapters of the book up, 4 short stories, and one picture book. I'm just keeping busy I guess. |
bennythebear Member Posts: 1225 From: kentucky,usa Registered: 12-13-2003 |
i liked your story "may and erb" . when i first read the ending i was like "that sucks...", because it being sad, not the writing. then after i read the moral of the story i was like "oh, ok...good point"...anywho...sorry for my rambling, keep up the good work and God bless. ------------------ www.gfa.org - Gospel for Asia www.persecution.com - Voice of the Martyrs |
Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
bennythebear, You're the first person to give me a comment on it other then Tanya (my wife). I'm glad you liked the story, sorry about the ending, but I was in a mood that day, and I needed something to remindme to keep my head strait. Also, back in the day, childrens stories were based off harsh truths. I was reflecting that through a childhood memory I had. If you're looking for something more upbeat, try Kimbit, my picture book, or A Happy Thought. The Guarden is a harsh story, but it will more then likly be published with someone. I just need to ok it. God Bless, |
bennythebear Member Posts: 1225 From: kentucky,usa Registered: 12-13-2003 |
i liked the garden. it's harsh, but it ended in victory. i could picture a game based around that story, or based on that story anyway. it would also make a good series, i think. anyway, enough of my opionated rambling, i like your stories . ------------------ www.gfa.org - Gospel for Asia www.persecution.com - Voice of the Martyrs |
Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
I don't mind, it's nice to hear what people think. Have you had a chance to read any of Vailion? |
bennythebear Member Posts: 1225 From: kentucky,usa Registered: 12-13-2003 |
nope. i've read a little bit of it. but once i see the weird words(which are important to the book) my mind starts zoning out . sometimes of have the focus of a 3 year old. ------------------ www.gfa.org - Gospel for Asia www.persecution.com - Voice of the Martyrs |
D-SIPL Moderator Posts: 1345 From: Maesteg, Wales Registered: 07-21-2001 |
Nice ending. I found it hard with some of the words, getting your brain around some them was difficult. But a good story. Maybe you can put it into a PDF? Nice work Angel, you working on anything else? --D-SIPL ------------------
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ArchAngel Member Posts: 3450 From: SV, CA, USA Registered: 01-29-2002 |
hey Angel, nice to hear from you again. little busy now, but when I can, I'm gonna read it. looks interesting! ------------------ |
goop2 Member Posts: 1059 From: Registered: 06-30-2004 |
quote: Actualy Im desperate for help with storylines... ------------------ I dont like siggys. They are to hard to think up :( |
D-SIPL Moderator Posts: 1345 From: Maesteg, Wales Registered: 07-21-2001 |
Angel doesn't hang out here much anymore, if at all. So no chance there. --D-SIPL ------------------
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Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
bennythebear, The words in the book are spelt by the Hazeemtor phonics table. Neenteko for example could be spelt Nenteko in English. Meeg could also be spelt Meg. Nahmeo could be as simple as Nameo. However, I wrote the language for the meeg culture. So any word that orginated from the langage I spell by the Hazeemtor phonics table. I guess it's something that big fans would really glue to more. From what I understand most readers read words the best way they can, or make up the sound of the word. Vailion has been pronounced so many ways now - I can't even keep track of them. Anyways, sorry for the difficulty, but there is nothing I can do. D-SIPL, ArchAngel, Goop2, D-SIPL, |
ArchAngel Member Posts: 3450 From: SV, CA, USA Registered: 01-29-2002 |
quote: psh. your names in mines. yeah right. although, it's probably giving you a bad name. ------------------ |
D-SIPL Moderator Posts: 1345 From: Maesteg, Wales Registered: 07-21-2001 |
It's great to have you back, but some of the old skool have left. heh nevermind. --D-SIPL ------------------
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Angel Member Posts: 699 From: The Blissful State Of Me? Registered: 05-21-2001 |
ArchAngel, I'm not quite sure what you're getting at, but ok... D-SIPL, |
goop2 Member Posts: 1059 From: Registered: 06-30-2004 |
Im actualy using RM2K right now... I want to learn a code, I was using Game Maker, but I got frustrated with the messaging and stuff... Im real serius about making this game though. I also want a message in it, but not make it a preaching game... sorta like a secular game with a Christian message... I know... that makes no sense at all. Ill tell you the story so far sometime. ------------------ I dont like siggys. They are to hard to think up :( |