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Angel

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Posts: 699
From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
Well peeps its been an interesting trip thus far and my agency just got my web page up. Dont exspect to much but its something to check out.

http://www.vailionoverture.stauthor.com/

Let me know if you guys find any boo-boos
~Angel~

Imsold4christ

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Posts: 305
From: Gresham, OR, US
Registered: 01-20-2001
Hey, you kept the beard after all, awesome!

I think I found a boo-boo. At the bottom of the page it says "website coming soon." Obviously the website is already there though.

†Caleb†

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Klumsy

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Vailion’s Short History section


They fond that the cat-like race had a mental power ....

'fond' should be 'found' right?

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ArchAngel

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Posts: 3450
From: SV, CA, USA
Registered: 01-29-2002
pretty cool, I must say...

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Angel

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Posts: 699
From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
imsold4christ the web page coming soon things means that there will be a link soon to a page totaly devoted to my work... i just simply need to deside where to put it and what all should be on it. I will take any suggestions yall may have. oh and yes I kept the beard for the time being. I was simply to lazy and didnt care what I looked like. If it wernt for my wife I probly would have had dread locks and the works :P

klumsy nice catch on the fond found thing I will let them know and get it fixed.

ArchAngel thanks for the intrest

~Angel~


Curry
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Posts: 134
From: USA
Registered: 11-21-2002
Your plot is good--I think you must have a good ability to organize a fantasy world in your mind. The picture came out nice!

I also sent you a PM.

Curry

Angel

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Posts: 699
From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
Thanks for the complement. I didn't think that tid bit of text was that impressive. Still if you want to have a real chance to read my work- my dad is working on a web page for me. The web page will more then likly have the first three chapters of my book.

~Angel~

GUMP

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Posts: 1335
From: Melbourne, FL USA
Registered: 11-09-2002
I actually stopped reading that section of the text after only a couple lines. It gives away too much of the overall plot, imo. I'd rather learn that stuff while reading the books.
Angel

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Posts: 699
From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
I would mkae a note of that Gump but my agent wanted an overview of the book(s). It's a horrible overview in my openion but I had no choice. One miner note is that they are going to start shipping my book off soon. It's just a matter of a publisher saying they want it now.

~Angel~

GUMP

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Posts: 1335
From: Melbourne, FL USA
Registered: 11-09-2002
Speaking of your book, now that I finished mine I just started reading yours again. I'm sure you've been editing it a lot since you gave me a copy; can I get hold of that? Also, I need to send you the latest version of my book. I think I've modified something in every chapter over this last week.
Angel

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From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
That's no prob. Today is my little girl's b-day so I will be extra busy... however I will try to get it to you today. Oh and don't bother with editing it- I will more then likly have an editor picking it to peaces soon enough

~Angel~

Mack

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Nice pic-n-page Angel! I think you should have a picture of you with your little one on the back of it.

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c h i e f y

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Posts: 415
From: Surrey, United Kingdom
Registered: 03-07-2002
quote:
C.A. Kelsey is married and has two children. He was working on Role-Playing-Game stories- after several teams breaking up Mr. Kelsey was calling it quits. However, his wife Tanya who had fallen in love with his characters and descriptions urged him to keep writing. Mr. Kelsey began work on a small story for his wife’s amusement. The question of what happened next never stopped coming from Mrs. Kelsey. Soon a 2,500 word story had grown into a short book and then an epic tale. Mrs. Kelsey read the last sentence of the book. She then turned to her husband and said ‘It can’t end like that! What happens next? I want more!’ Mr. Kelsey is now working on the next book and foresees at least three more for this series if not more.

The author - bio is top notch!! The web page itself is most professional and the bio just caps it all, a very good read! Nice one Angel, you're getting there alright!

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Angel

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Posts: 699
From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
Thanks Mack- I actuly would have liked my wife and child in a pic with me.

c h i e f y, thanks for the complement. I honistly had no idea what to do when they asked me for all that info. They also wanted it within a small amount of words. The one quote you posted had to be approximately 120 words. I gave them a 133 word answer.

I did lie on two parts of that page. My book is well over 85,000 words. Its more like 87,000 words but thats with the appendix. Then my second girl is not born yet but I clame her as mine

TTFN
~Angel~

Angel

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From: The Blissful State Of Me?
Registered: 05-21-2001
They sent the book off (I think I told yall that) and half of the replys came in. All but one said they didnt have the time for the book. However one of them has shown intrest. So im still kicking back and waiting but I think I said I would keep yall posted.

~Angel~

ArchAngel

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Posts: 3450
From: SV, CA, USA
Registered: 01-29-2002
standing by...

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