it's to be done in about two months and it's a really simple Game.
Here's a snippit of the Script

Backstory

The setting is in a Future City admits Great Religion oppression and Social degeneration. In other words, Thousands of people Work and play inside For a Good reason I might add… but I’m not going to tell you why … you’ll have to play the game that is going to be free to the Public on Nov. 18th 2002 Via Sky Productions Skynetnews.tripod.com There's not a lot of activity outside the walls of the city considering that there surrounded by a Shield of Gang Crime and an oppressive Crime organization (to be named later) surrounding the City(that is also to be named later) ( Can't give too much away ... that is that I haven't even Gotten all the names picked out Hehehe)
Anyway... there's an Organization that is Fighting against the Oppression... now... there not for the City nor are they for the Criminals. There a band of Friends formed after an earthquake ripped there town to shreds. Because of this Earthquake they were Forced to move to the city to live. There are many reasons that each person has for personally joining this organization and you can ask them all about there experiences before there involvement with the Org. where we jump in is here. It’s Fox’s First day here at The Centeral Command Center. And he’s getting the usual treatment, though there’s things about Fox that Sky – the leader of the Org. knows about, and fox doesn’t.

The walk Back to Command

As Fox is walking down the corridor, he looks at the Map and paper that he picked up and bumped into a Girl
She is carrying a portfolio of papers and just as Fox looks up he quickly moves out of the way because she’s not looking where she is going.... (It’s Ame but the User doesn’t know that.)
Fox breaths so loud that you can hear it

..... Meanwhile......

Cut away to Sky’s office as we hear over the intercom

Ed: Yeah, I don’t know how he did it but he fixed it in under three minutes... I mean the record is 5 mins.

Sky: so have you found out what he can really do? ...

Ed: No, Sir but I sent him up to you for an eval... I don’t know what to do... I mean it was my hardest test.... not everybody passes that test... I mean, only ten percent pass in under 10 min. and only a total of 1.5% pass.

Sky: I know the statistics... and please be careful about quoting them to me.

Ed: O, Sorry...

Sky: it’s ok, how long will he be?

Ed: I sent him around the long way. He doesn’t know about Jonson’s pass way yet

Sky: ETA?

Ed: Ten min

Sky: From what time?
(Fox walks in the Door)

Ed: Um, about ten mins ago.

Sky: Bye Eddie (shuts off Intercom)

Sky: Hello Fox.

Fox: Hello.

Sky: Do you have my mp3 player?

Fox: Eddie said..... (Sky interrupts Fox)

Sky: Hum... well there’s one thing you are going to have to learn.... it’s called Chain of command.

Fox: Forgive me.

Sky: Fox... this is your first day.... I’m expecting you to make mistakes... please do not apologize for what you do wrong today... you do not know.

Fox: Thank you.

Sky: I sent you to Eddie to see what you could do.... Eddie tells me that you passed his tests amazingly.... and that’s what I expected... but my test is going to be much harder.... and you will not pass. This test will tell me where I can put you.... and to where you will be the hardest worker... and the best at what you are doing.... here I do not waste talents.... and I allow for developments of other skills that one possesses. If you have any special talents they will come out here. And they must... please do not hold back.... let me explain what we are about to do...

Later on....

An emergency arises… The center goes to every length to keeps it’s location a secret and when there’s a Threat to that Security. The people at Central jump on the source of that Threat. That’s what this next part is, there at the beginning of an initial Threat situation.

Jonson: Sir… why Ame?

Sky: I need her down here... please don’t ask questions unless you know what your talking about.

Jonson: sir, sorry sir.

Sky: Lets Go.... we need to cut them all off... where are they at now and where do they seem to be heading?

Jonson: One min.

Sky: Jonson you know better than that.... hurry up. We’ll meet you outside. Fox lets go.

Fox: Sir

<Sky running to the Door Fox follows and trips on a cord.... pulling out headphones from someone’s ears and jack.... >

Fox: what the....

Sky: Gurney… come with us you just volunteered. Jonson, Stay, you have command.

Gurney: yes sir.

< So the three, Gurney Fox and sky head down the corridor to an elevator. Just as they get to the elevator sky turns to Fox >

Sky: Fox wait here.... wait for Ame... she’s not a fighter... she will need you to fight for her.... I’m sure that she’ll tell you why in the course of the following events.

Fox: Sir I don’t know what she looks like.

Sky: remember that girl you bumped into in the hall... that’s her.

Fox: whaaah<elevator shuts> hey, how did you.... ah never mind

< Fox turns around and leans up against the elevator doors... a couple of moments pass and then the elevator doors open with Fox leaning on them. He falls in on Ame. >

Ame: so we meet again.... I must apologize for me being so rude before... I just got so focused and didn’t want to stop... sorry.

Fox: No, it’s ok.

Ame: so do you know what’s going on?

<Doors shut, Fox just in time pulling his foot out of the way. >

Fox: we were traced... <Ame hit’s top-level button>and we were called to eliminate the threat. That’s all I know. <Fox picks himself up off Ame>

Ame: that’s odd... is Jonson with sky?

Fox: no, it’s me and Gurney and Sky.

Ame: what... O no. That’s not good

Fox: what do you mean....?

<Door dings>

Ame: later... we need to go and help Gurney.

<Door opens>

Ame: let’s go

Fox: what’s wrong with gurney?

< They both come to a wide-open plot of land. Fox turns around just in time to see the last of the elevator disappear underground >

Ame: he could die if we don’t hurry.

Fox: how do you know? I’m sure he can take care of himself. He looks very capable.

Ame: if we have time later I will explain it to you… but now we have to help him.

<Jonson speaks through Fox’s MacroBot.>

Jonson: Fox are you there.... to run the communicator just hit the green button

<Fox looks for the Green button finding it on the underside of the bot slightly hidden. >

Fox: Jonson what is it…

Jonson: Do you know where you’re going?

Fox: no, I’m just following Ame.

Jonson: well, you are going in the wrong direction.

Ame: Jonson what do you know.

Jonson: well comparatively more than you right now.

Ame: you know, I know, what’s going on just as much as you, if not more... if there’s something that I don’t know about tell me Jonson

Jonson: well, it’s just that you’re headed away for Sky and Gurney.

Ame: I know...

<Fox stops dead slides a little on the gravel.>

Fox: wait. If there over there... we need to go to them.

<Ame stops and turns toward Fox>

Ame: you have to trust me... they will be fine until they get up to this point... they need us here first.

Fox: I dont’ know if they’ll last...

Ame: Sky can handle this all on his own... but Gurney will die in the process... if we don’t help him. He’ll never make it.

Fox: I don’t understand.

Ame: Lets go.

< Ame runs on, Fox takes a second and follows>

<They come up to an old section of Commercial area (it’s very dark) and then Ame stops while Fox stops right behind her.>

Ame: Here! Fox Hide... now….. Move!

Fox: What... why...

<Ame Grabs Him and pushes him>

Ame: Go Now!

Fox: ok fine

< Ame finds a portion of alley and Fox hides behind and slightly under a car.>

And that's all you get for now... there's 40 pages of this game yet it's not complete...

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